Post by Tundrastorm1991 on Feb 7, 2009 12:21:36 GMT -5
Okay, well this may seem rude and all, but I want to make a point of it. Please, try not to make your cat flawless and a hero! Here's an example of what I mean:
Name: Loyalsoul
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Thunderclan
Gender: Male
Appearance: Loyalsoul is a handsome brown and white tom. He has lean muscles under and piercing blue eyes. People say his eyes are like peaces of the sky, beautiful and calm. He has sharp claws that can rip anything. He's really attractive.
Personality: Loyalsoul is a modest cat. All his clanmates love that they can depend on him. Like his name says, he's loyal to all that earn his respect. She-cats and toms like him, and Loyalsoul has yet to find a mate, though that should be easy. Most think that he will be deputy one day, or even leader! He's a born leader, with silent authority. Loyalsoul is an amazing hunter and a great fighter! He has never lost a battle, and never missed catching a prey, except once when he was a kit. Loyalsoul is one of the only cats in Thunderclan who can fish and swim. He has gotten out of the shadows to become a true hero of Thunderclan.
And then the history goes on to show how he was born to two great Thunderclan cats and at first was a bit outshone but then saved somebody and all that and became a hero.... that kind of stuff.
Well sure it's great to have a wonderful cat who's a great hunter, fighter, and also attractive. Plus let's just make that cat popular right? That's cool.
Well it may seem cool to whoever makes that cat, but then RPing is just dull, and it gives your posts more interesting themes if your cat has some different aspects. Here's what I mean, as an example:
Name: Hawkdanger
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Shadowclan
Gender: Tom
Appearance; Hawkdanger can be called an attractive tom, but he has cold blue eyes. His pelt is streaked with black tabby lines, and though he seems handsome, he has this sort of evil aura. He has sharp, curved claws that seem deadly.
Personality: Hawkdanger is a cruel cat. He's grown up in a cruel clan, been taught by cruel cats, and has loved cruel cats. He's been deceived, cheated, lied to, beaten up, and has in turn done these stuff to others. He's a great fighter, but he never seems patient enough to catch a lot of prey. He sometimes just chases his tail in boredom, something that causes him great embarrassment, but which he catches up for with snapping or yelling at other cats. He's pretty stuck-up, but he's a valuable member to his clan. He's popular among the Nightclan cats, but uh... the Starclan cats just hate his guts. They like to tease him for his limited patience and lack of hunting skills, which he hates. Hawkdanger likes to prowl the territory, hoping to be able to catch the glimpse of an enemy cat to beat up.
Well, sure, it can be debated that he's also handsome, and popular among the Nightclan cats. But he's not great at hunting and fighting, and he's not one of those angelic leaders. Sure he's a tough fighter, but he lacks hunting skills and patience.
I just want everybody to consider that your cats should have flaws. I mean, nobody is perfect. A lot of people follow this already, but I'm just reminding.
Tundrastorm1991: My friend wrote this as a rant, and I thought it was pretty funny. So I decided it would be nice to use it to prove a point on here. So be sure to pay attention to this!
Name: Loyalsoul
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Thunderclan
Gender: Male
Appearance: Loyalsoul is a handsome brown and white tom. He has lean muscles under and piercing blue eyes. People say his eyes are like peaces of the sky, beautiful and calm. He has sharp claws that can rip anything. He's really attractive.
Personality: Loyalsoul is a modest cat. All his clanmates love that they can depend on him. Like his name says, he's loyal to all that earn his respect. She-cats and toms like him, and Loyalsoul has yet to find a mate, though that should be easy. Most think that he will be deputy one day, or even leader! He's a born leader, with silent authority. Loyalsoul is an amazing hunter and a great fighter! He has never lost a battle, and never missed catching a prey, except once when he was a kit. Loyalsoul is one of the only cats in Thunderclan who can fish and swim. He has gotten out of the shadows to become a true hero of Thunderclan.
And then the history goes on to show how he was born to two great Thunderclan cats and at first was a bit outshone but then saved somebody and all that and became a hero.... that kind of stuff.
Well sure it's great to have a wonderful cat who's a great hunter, fighter, and also attractive. Plus let's just make that cat popular right? That's cool.
Well it may seem cool to whoever makes that cat, but then RPing is just dull, and it gives your posts more interesting themes if your cat has some different aspects. Here's what I mean, as an example:
Name: Hawkdanger
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Shadowclan
Gender: Tom
Appearance; Hawkdanger can be called an attractive tom, but he has cold blue eyes. His pelt is streaked with black tabby lines, and though he seems handsome, he has this sort of evil aura. He has sharp, curved claws that seem deadly.
Personality: Hawkdanger is a cruel cat. He's grown up in a cruel clan, been taught by cruel cats, and has loved cruel cats. He's been deceived, cheated, lied to, beaten up, and has in turn done these stuff to others. He's a great fighter, but he never seems patient enough to catch a lot of prey. He sometimes just chases his tail in boredom, something that causes him great embarrassment, but which he catches up for with snapping or yelling at other cats. He's pretty stuck-up, but he's a valuable member to his clan. He's popular among the Nightclan cats, but uh... the Starclan cats just hate his guts. They like to tease him for his limited patience and lack of hunting skills, which he hates. Hawkdanger likes to prowl the territory, hoping to be able to catch the glimpse of an enemy cat to beat up.
Well, sure, it can be debated that he's also handsome, and popular among the Nightclan cats. But he's not great at hunting and fighting, and he's not one of those angelic leaders. Sure he's a tough fighter, but he lacks hunting skills and patience.
I just want everybody to consider that your cats should have flaws. I mean, nobody is perfect. A lot of people follow this already, but I'm just reminding.
Tundrastorm1991: My friend wrote this as a rant, and I thought it was pretty funny. So I decided it would be nice to use it to prove a point on here. So be sure to pay attention to this!